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A Butterfly in the Spring by ~BlueDagron:iconBlueDagron:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Fixed


Spring rain sings as your lips dance upon mine.
A playful grin showers your face.
You pull me closer, until our legs intertwine.

Your hips grind into me as we now lie.
Pleasure sprinkles from us as we embrace.
Spring rain sings as your lips dance upon mine.

Your hands encompass mine as I slowly rise.
Your heated breath causes my blood to race.
You pull me closer, until our legs intertwine.

My fingers trace your soft skin inside,
as a subtle moan escapes your lustrous face.
Spring rain sings as your lips dance upon mine.

Hazelnut hair cascades around my eyes,
as you draw me into your deep gaze.
You pull me closer, until our legs intertwine.

You caress my face with a fervent sigh.
I hold you in my most earnest embrace.
Spring rain sings as your lips dance upon mine.
You pull me closer, until our legs intertwine.
©2005-2009 ~BlueDagron
:iconbluedagron:

Author's Comments

My first romantic poem, and my first villanelle. ^___^'

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:iconturpentinesaint:
~turpentinesaint Apr 18, 2005, 8:27:55 AM
you're right...you're not so stoic after all. that was double-rawr! :)
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~BlueDagron Apr 18, 2005, 8:28:47 AM
^____^ *winks*

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"You live only once. You do not have to go the hard way. You can live how you want, and die as you want. But... do not forget to protect those important to you, no matter what path you choose."
:iconfiredaemon:
=firedaemon Apr 29, 2005, 8:59:34 AM
This made me smile. Almost erotic, but in a loving, tender way. Gorgeous
x x x

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Enticed by your Electric Impulse Smile
:iconbluedagron:
~BlueDagron Apr 29, 2005, 9:10:29 AM
^____^ That was very hard for me to do. I had a few friends telling me to try writing an erotic poem, and I wanted to try to write something beautiful, not... *shrugs* pornographic I guess. Then I decided to put it in a form. *shivers*
Thank you very much. ^____^ I'm glad I was able to make you smile. ^___^
Smiling is a beautiful thing in itself.

--
"You live only once. You do not have to go the hard way. You can live how you want, and die as you want. But... do not forget to protect those important to you, no matter what path you choose."
:iconfiredaemon:
=firedaemon Apr 30, 2005, 5:42:56 AM
yeah, I know what you mean, but i think you've got a great balance. It's not erotic in a pornographic way at all, there's too much emotion in it.
x x x

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Enticed by your Electric Impulse Smile
:iconbluedagron:
~BlueDagron Apr 30, 2005, 1:20:32 PM
Very cool. *^____^*
Thank you very much for the comliments, and telling me I actually did something right. *chuckles*
^______^

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"You live only once. You do not have to go the hard way. You can live how you want, and die as you want. But... do not forget to protect those important to you, no matter what path you choose."
:iconfiredaemon:
=firedaemon May 1, 2005, 12:58:57 PM
lol, of course you've done something right... not that art is about right and wrong, but meh ^^ You write well
x x x

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Enticed by your Electric Impulse Smile
:iconbluedagron:
~BlueDagron May 3, 2005, 4:07:52 AM
YEA!!!! ^____^ :boogie:
I don't know... I've read a bit that was so wrong it made me cry... *Chuckles*
...and not because it was a powerful piece... *twitch* I've also read a lot that made me twitch. ^_____^
Thank you very much firedaemon. ^_____^ :glomp:

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"You live only once. You do not have to go the hard way. You can live how you want, and die as you want. But... do not forget to protect those important to you, no matter what path you choose."
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